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seemed undone...

following your stuff for a long time now and the quality of this one just seemed rushed. Waterlollies was phenomenal and this is a step back. Animation was a little choppy in spots and not as cleaned up. Not saying your work here is bad at all, it's great by most standards. Just saying it's got the feel that you hurried to get it out...being just a teaser and all. Look forward to seeing the full flick. Thanks.

That's my thoughts exactly...

I don't get why if you gave the stick figures facial expressions, voices, beards, personalities, etc...and put so much effort into this flash (and yes i do recognize that), why didn't you just go the little bit extra and make them "fullbody" as you put it. Okay, it's a style thing? I can roll with that too, but I say then that the style doesn't fit the whole. Your backgrounds and even props in this animation are not keeping with the style of the stick figures. I agree with the guy below me that it makes the whole thing look "wrong." I'm not altogether against stick figures...just think that a style should be kept throughout the entire film.

Animation-wise, good job. It was slow and realistic. You have potential to make something great with your attention to detail (aside from the obvious sticks). Sound and music were all good choices.

I'd just like to see something you do to give more merit is all. Had you fleshed out the characters, this would have been awesome and, more importantly, made it your own. Instead of just taking a different spin on rehashed style. I suggest creating your own style. Thanks for submitting.

Manfreak responds:

Hmmm.... That little bit extra you're talking about is beyond my abilities atm. I have never animated fullbody and can barely draw a person as it is so this is my limit in terms of character design for now. The response from this has opted me to start with fullbody tests but it will be a while before I can make anything decent. I reckon people are thinking less of me because I acted lazy and used stick figures but really, that is all I can do :( ..... for now.

meh...

I'll give you 6/10 for your style and animation. Good attention paid to the mouth movements. Your pace however was bad. You could have easily done this in one episode. It would have flowed better.

Recent Game Reviews

4 Game Reviews

I think...

...the game is very addicting. I love it! Has anyone else had problems with the medals? I've gotten i don't know how many of them, but they don't show up on my profile page.

pretty sweet...

Liked it a LOT! Played through all of it and both storylines. The dork below me shouldn't be giving out the answers in the review. You spoil it for others man! Music is great and gameplay keeps getting better and better. Can't wait to see how the story ends! What's next.

nice game...

I had a lot of fun being bored enough to play it that long. It's not really an original idea like the last guy said...there's the Mushroom Tower Defense. But i liked it all the same! Especially getting to set my own path for the aliens. The graphics could have been a little more stylish...but good work mang!

Recent Audio Reviews

1 Audio Review

yeah...

yeah, i like what i hear but the drums definitely need to be beefed up. I can't feel them!

Element responds:

Okay i'll get right to beefing up my chops.

I've got too many ideas running through my head to keep up with them. Time to recruit some backup.

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